On Friday we are celebrating my dads retirement from a job of 30 years and my moms going back to work after being out for 2 months after back surgery... I decided to get them a little gift of pacifiers and a blank card that I'm going to write a little poem in.
But I need your opinion and help. The poem is as follows
"Time to make room
For someone coming soon
The new baby (last name here)
Will be here in June!"
Do you guys have any opinions on how to improve it or change it a bit? I just thought of it last night at around 3 am when I couldn't sleep. Also, any other ideas for telling family?